Wednesday, May 28, 2014

Intro Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? Well my friend Victor has. He loved this girl named Theresa. She went to his school and catechism class. He wanted her to be his girlfriend.


Reason 1: Direct quote 


"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall  clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.


Reason 2: Paraphrase

Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.


Reason 3: Direct quote #2

"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.

Ending

Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa. I think he's gonna do anything to get her as a girlfriend.

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