Wednesday, May 28, 2014

Intro Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? Well my friend Victor has. He loved this girl named Theresa. She went to his school and catechism class. He wanted her to be his girlfriend.


Reason 1: Direct quote 


"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall  clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.


Reason 2: Paraphrase

Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.


Reason 3: Direct quote #2

"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.

Ending

Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa. I think he's gonna do anything to get her as a girlfriend.

Friday, May 23, 2014

Intro
Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? Well my friend Victor has. He loved this girl named Theresa. She went to his school and catechism class. He wanted her to be his girlfriend.


Reason 1: Direct quote 


"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall  clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year.


Reason 2: Paraphrase

Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend.

Tuesday, May 20, 2014

Intro

Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? Well my friend Victor has. He loved this girl named Miranda. She went to his school and catechism class. He wanted her to be his girlfriend.


Reason 1: Direct quote 


"Teresa is going to be my girl this year, he promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall  clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Miranda and he says to himself, shes gonna be my girl this year.
Have you have done something so hard for someone you love? Well if you have, then you know what Miranda is feeling.

Friday, May 16, 2014

Have you have done something so hard for someone you love?

Friday, May 9, 2014

Well, I love Fridays. Fridays are the best day of the week. Tonight's FNL. I want to go. But the draft is also today. What should I do?!?!?!?!?! I want to go to FNL. But I don't want to miss the Draft. Should I just watch the draft online. Ya that's what I'll do. I hope the draft is online. 2:30 to go.  My friend Joe is writing to . Everyone in the class is writing. Mr. J is making us. Less than to minutes. What to do, what to do, what to do. Oh ya. THE LIONS ARE IDIOTS. They chose a tight end. WE NEED SECONDARY. The owners an idiot. ( No offense) We have to many weapons on offense we need a safety. Or a corner. At least a SECONDARY PERSON. That's all folks.  Actually, maybe not. Mr. J's making us type for 5 more minutes. I have a lot of friends. I can name 2 that are really close friends, Kyle, and Joseph. There always there for me. THE LIONS OWNER IS AN IDIOT. WE HAVE 2 great tight ends but not any defense . Defense wins championships. We have 1 good person on defense. Ndamonaking Suh. But he's a DT( Defensive tackle) for crying out loud. WE NEED SECONDARY. We have Chris Houston who is the best corner on the team. WE NEED SECONDARY. That's all folks.

The draft for 2014.






Lions 2014 Draft pick. Tight End


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