Intro Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? In the short story seventh grade by Gary Soto, Victor wants Teresa to be his girlfriend.
Reason 1: Direct quote
"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.
Reason 2: Paraphrase
Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how. He even said he knew French and he embarrassed himself soooooo much.
Reason 3: Direct quote #2
"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.
Ending
Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa. What would you do if your Victor?
Monday, June 9, 2014
Friday, June 6, 2014
Intro
Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? In the short story seventh grade by Gary Soto, Victor wants Teresa to be his girlfriend.
Reason 1: Direct quote
"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.
Reason 2: Paraphrase
Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.
Reason 3: Direct quote #2
"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.
Ending
Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa. What would you do if your Victor.
Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? In the short story seventh grade by Gary Soto, Victor wants Teresa to be his girlfriend.
Reason 1: Direct quote
"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.
Reason 2: Paraphrase
Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.
Reason 3: Direct quote #2
"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.
Ending
Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa. What would you do if your Victor.
Thursday, June 5, 2014
Intro Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? In the short story seventh grade by Gary Soto, Victor wants Teresa to be
Reason 1: Direct quote
"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.
Reason 2: Paraphrase
Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.
Reason 3: Direct quote #2
"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.
Ending
Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa.
Reason 1: Direct quote
"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.
Reason 2: Paraphrase
Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.
Reason 3: Direct quote #2
"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.
Ending
Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa.
Monday, June 2, 2014
Prompt: reactions 6
I hate Captain Ivers because hes a bully. I don't like him because hes whoopin Arubus. Hes beaten him too. Captain Ivers isn't the best. But he's not the worst. But I still hate him. He doesn't let Arubus do anything. He was about to separate him from his mom. he was about to sell him to the West Indies. Now that's cols.
I hate Captain Ivers because hes a bully. I don't like him because hes whoopin Arubus. Hes beaten him too. Captain Ivers isn't the best. But he's not the worst. But I still hate him. He doesn't let Arubus do anything. He was about to separate him from his mom. he was about to sell him to the West Indies. Now that's cols.
Wednesday, May 28, 2014
5.28.14
Prompt: Do you think this book is a realistic account of that historical time period? Why or Why not? Provide evidence to support your thinking
Yes, I do think this is a realistic account of historical time period. I mean, it could of happened, but I bet it wasn't the same names or same place. It could of happened somewhere else and to other people. But I doubt that exact place, or the exact people. It could of happened to other people so it is a realistic account of history. This could of happened on a daily bases. This actually probably happened to someone that I was related to. Or anyone else. I mean there are some real people in there, like George Washington. Other than that, I don't see anything that can make it less true.
Yes, I do think this is a realistic account of historical time period. I mean, it could of happened, but I bet it wasn't the same names or same place. It could of happened somewhere else and to other people. But I doubt that exact place, or the exact people. It could of happened to other people so it is a realistic account of history. This could of happened on a daily bases. This actually probably happened to someone that I was related to. Or anyone else. I mean there are some real people in there, like George Washington. Other than that, I don't see anything that can make it less true.
My favorite posts of 2013-2014 school year
First post
Brenden K.
April 16th 2014 19900, Hickory Leaf
Southfield, MI 48076 Patricia Chinn,
BCS athletic Director
1252, Covington road,
Bloomfield Hills, MI 48301
Dear,
Mrs. Chinn
I think that BCS should have a football team for 6th 7th and 8th graders. The school has sponsored it but there weren't enough proud dads and a teacher suspended it. The kids would have a great time. Also the kids would have more friends because they would bond. They did not try hard enough to get enough proud dads. Every middle school should have a football team. It would be awesome to compete against other schools in Michigan. (http://wiki.answers.com/Q/Should_schools_have_football_teams#slide=1&article=Should_schools_have_football_teams)
It would be just like high school football. We could have cheerleaders, a band play for us, and even announcers. Having a football team is just like having a basketball or volleyball team. It would be so much fun!
There used to be one but it got suspended. It is a law that girls and boys must have the same amount of sports. I think that we should try again because the kids would be happier. If you do it, Covington would be more popular and people would get to the NFL and be from Covington. Also that the other schools would make fun of us. One solution you could do is that you can try again. What I think you should do, is try to get a football team. Have help this time.
Brenden K.
April 16th 2014 19900, Hickory Leaf
Southfield, MI 48076 Patricia Chinn,
BCS athletic Director
1252, Covington road,
Bloomfield Hills, MI 48301
Dear,
Mrs. Chinn
I think that BCS should have a football team for 6th 7th and 8th graders. The school has sponsored it but there weren't enough proud dads and a teacher suspended it. The kids would have a great time. Also the kids would have more friends because they would bond. They did not try hard enough to get enough proud dads. Every middle school should have a football team. It would be awesome to compete against other schools in Michigan. (http://wiki.answers.com/Q/Should_schools_have_football_teams#slide=1&article=Should_schools_have_football_teams)
It would be just like high school football. We could have cheerleaders, a band play for us, and even announcers. Having a football team is just like having a basketball or volleyball team. It would be so much fun!
There used to be one but it got suspended. It is a law that girls and boys must have the same amount of sports. I think that we should try again because the kids would be happier. If you do it, Covington would be more popular and people would get to the NFL and be from Covington. Also that the other schools would make fun of us. One solution you could do is that you can try again. What I think you should do, is try to get a football team. Have help this time.
When most middle school students enter their new building, they do not do so alone, but instead join with other pupils on a team. The process of teaming middle school students is a useful one that serves many purposes, leading many schools to adopt the practice as a way to help their students.
Physical activity is the most obvious benefit of sports participation. Children often spend too much time watching television or playing video games. But sports practices and games provide an opportunity for exercise that can help keep kids in shape and healthy. That's why BCS should have a football team.
CC: Rick Joseph, Mark Morawski, Mom
Physical activity is the most obvious benefit of sports participation. Children often spend too much time watching television or playing video games. But sports practices and games provide an opportunity for exercise that can help keep kids in shape and healthy. That's why BCS should have a football team.
CC: Rick Joseph, Mark Morawski, Mom
I like this post because it was my letter of complaint. This post made me talk to Mrs. Chinn about getting a football team for BCS. But we have even sports so we didn't.
Number 2
"Year-round schooling is the wrong choice for students of America because it doesn't have results." "Throughout America, many school administrations have been trying to decide whether or not to keep schools open all year round." If you keep schools open year round then people would have to memorize more stuff and forget the other concepts. This conception would not have a positive outcome because businesses and people would lose money and jobs, summer camps are available for those who need it, and it would cost more money to run the schools.(compclass) Report Post President Obama is trying to come up with a plan that would require students to go to school year-round. I think that year-round school would have a negative impact on students and wouldn't be very encouraging.(pantagraph)"To solve our schools' problems with declining test scores, rising costs, overcrowding, and bad behavior, more and more people are beginning to turn to a year-round school calendar." " If you want more school go to summer school." (debate) Therefore, year-round school is a bad idea.
Evidence types: Claim = opinion on a topic Evidence: Facts, Personal Opinion, reasons
Works Cited
Sally, Student "http://www.compclass.us/yre/my_view.html " "Year Round Education is Not a Good Idea" online
http://www.pantagraph.com/news/opinion/mailbag/year-round-school-bad-idea-for-students/article_356f1b3a-baa2-11de-ade3-001cc4c03286.html October 17, 2009 12:00 am/online/Julia Sines/
http://www.debate.org/opinions/should-there-be-year-round-school?nsort=1&ysort=5 preston fitzgerald/ April 13/ 2013/ Online
Evidence types: Claim = opinion on a topic Evidence: Facts, Personal Opinion, reasons
Works Cited
Sally, Student "http://www.compclass.us/yre/my_view.html " "Year Round Education is Not a Good Idea" online
http://www.pantagraph.com/news/opinion/mailbag/year-round-school-bad-idea-for-students/article_356f1b3a-baa2-11de-ade3-001cc4c03286.html October 17, 2009 12:00 am/online/Julia Sines/
http://www.debate.org/opinions/should-there-be-year-round-school?nsort=1&ysort=5 preston fitzgerald/ April 13/ 2013/ Online
I like this post because it made people believe that we shouldn't have year round school. Year round school is bad. People all ready spend more time in school.
Number 3
Intro Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? Well my friend Victor has. He loved this girl named Theresa. She went to his school and catechism class. He wanted her to be his girlfriend.
Reason 1: Direct quote
"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.
Reason 2: Paraphrase
Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.
Reason 3: Direct quote #2
"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.
Ending
Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa. I think he's gonna do anything to get her as a girlfriend.
Reason 1: Direct quote
"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.
Reason 2: Paraphrase
Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.
Reason 3: Direct quote #2
"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.
Ending
Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa. I think he's gonna do anything to get her as a girlfriend.
This post was my first draft of my literary essay. It let me do this. I was happy when I finished.
number 4
Well, I love Fridays. Fridays are the best day of the week. Tonight's FNL. I want to go. But the draft is also today. What should I do?!?!?!?!?! I want to go to FNL. But I don't want to miss the Draft. Should I just watch the draft online. Ya that's what I'll do. I hope the draft is online. 2:30 to go. My friend Joe is writing to . Everyone in the class is writing. Mr. J is making us. Less than to minutes. What to do, what to do, what to do. Oh ya. THE LIONS ARE IDIOTS. They chose a tight end. WE NEED SECONDARY. The owners an idiot. ( No offense) We have to many weapons on offense we need a safety. Or a corner. At least a SECONDARY PERSON. That's all folks. Actually, maybe not. Mr. J's making us type for 5 more minutes. I have a lot of friends. I can name 2 that are really close friends, Kyle, and Joseph. There always there for me. THE LIONS OWNER IS AN IDIOT. WE HAVE 2 great tight ends but not any defense . Defense wins championships. We have 1 good person on defense. Ndamonaking Suh. But he's a DT( Defensive tackle) for crying out loud. WE NEED SECONDARY. We have Chris Houston who is the best corner on the team. WE NEED SECONDARY. That's all folks.
The draft for 2014.
This was when the NFL draft day 1 happened. The lions chose a tight end. Eric Ebron. We have 2 decent tight ends now. Dang.
number 5
People have to test how high you can jump, how fast you can run etc. You get to have soooooo mush fun. Here are some of the positions. Lets start with offense. Now You have to now about the Quarterback. He's the play maker for the offense.
He throws the ball to the wide receivers and he runs the ball if he's fast. Or he can hand the ball off to the half back or the full back. The half back is the guy that runs the ball to the sides up the middle or even blocks for the quarterback. Now the Full Back. He sometimes runs the ball but most of the time he blocks for the QB.
Now the Offensive line. The block the Defensive line so that the D-line cant sack the quarterback. Sacking the quarterback is when you tackle him behind the line of scrimmage. The O-Line also makes Gaps for the Half back or fullback to run. Now the Wide Receivers.
The wide receivers catch the ball or if the half back runs the ball to the outside they block the Corner Backs. the wide receivers have to run routes and listen to the quarterback when he says something. So do the other positions. When they run the routes they have to trick the cornerbacks. Its really hard to do that.
Now the defense. Lets start with the defensive line. They try to get past the offensive line and sack the QB. Sacking the QB means that they lose yards and its harder for them to get a first down. They also try to stop the half back from running. The defensive line also stops the QB from running.
Now let me teach you about the linebackers. They can blitz they can jump high to pick the ball. they have to be able to jump really high. When they blitz they go up to the offensive line and try to sack the QB. When they don't blitz they cover the middle of the field.
Now the corner backs. They cover the wide receivers ad try to not make them catch a pass. sometimes they blitz but most of the time they cover the WRs. They have a hard job to do. Defense wins championships.
Last the safety's. They cover the back of the field. They have the hardest job of them all. They have to be fast. They have to jump high. They have to do a lot of stuff.
That's football for you.
He throws the ball to the wide receivers and he runs the ball if he's fast. Or he can hand the ball off to the half back or the full back. The half back is the guy that runs the ball to the sides up the middle or even blocks for the quarterback. Now the Full Back. He sometimes runs the ball but most of the time he blocks for the QB.
Now the Offensive line. The block the Defensive line so that the D-line cant sack the quarterback. Sacking the quarterback is when you tackle him behind the line of scrimmage. The O-Line also makes Gaps for the Half back or fullback to run. Now the Wide Receivers.
The wide receivers catch the ball or if the half back runs the ball to the outside they block the Corner Backs. the wide receivers have to run routes and listen to the quarterback when he says something. So do the other positions. When they run the routes they have to trick the cornerbacks. Its really hard to do that.
Now the defense. Lets start with the defensive line. They try to get past the offensive line and sack the QB. Sacking the QB means that they lose yards and its harder for them to get a first down. They also try to stop the half back from running. The defensive line also stops the QB from running.
Now let me teach you about the linebackers. They can blitz they can jump high to pick the ball. they have to be able to jump really high. When they blitz they go up to the offensive line and try to sack the QB. When they don't blitz they cover the middle of the field.
Now the corner backs. They cover the wide receivers ad try to not make them catch a pass. sometimes they blitz but most of the time they cover the WRs. They have a hard job to do. Defense wins championships.
Last the safety's. They cover the back of the field. They have the hardest job of them all. They have to be fast. They have to jump high. They have to do a lot of stuff.
That's football for you.
This is a good post because I talk about the positions of football. There is defense and offense. Read it if you want to know
Intro Have you loved someone so much so that you have to do anything to get her/him? Well my friend Victor has. He loved this girl named Theresa. She went to his school and catechism class. He wanted her to be his girlfriend.
Reason 1: Direct quote
"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.
Reason 2: Paraphrase
Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.
Reason 3: Direct quote #2
"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.
Ending
Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa. I think he's gonna do anything to get her as a girlfriend.
Reason 1: Direct quote
"Teresa is going to be my girl this year.' He promised himself as he left the gym full of students in their new fall clothes." This quote proves my topic because Victor loves Theresa and he says to himself, she's gonna be my girl this year. He wants her. He will do anything.
Reason 2: Paraphrase
Victor really wants Theresa to be his girlfriend. Victor really would do anything for Theresa. He knew her because she went to his catechism class. He went to hers. I don't know when they first met. But I know how.
Reason 3: Direct quote #2
"Theresa asked him if he would help her with her French" Victor was surprised when he heard that so he said "Sure, anytime." Victor was probably really happy when that happened. He even said "Bonjour" to impress her in French class. The last sentence said "Victor was going to like seventh grade." Im sure he will.
Ending
Well, there you have it. Know you know what Victor did and how much he loved Teresa. I think he's gonna do anything to get her as a girlfriend.
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